IELTS Academic Writing Task 2

IELTS writing tasks' topics, answers, and comments.

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By maya sharma, 2018-08-14  
Band: NA (Total words: 177)
Comment:
  • The essay is less than 250, doesn't match the basic criteria.
  • You had better rewrite the essay to 4 or 5 paragraphs.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 1 as start point.
  • Suggest to refine coherence and cohesion by removing wordy linking words.
 IELTS Academic Writing Task 2 - Topic, Answer, and Comment
International travel has many advantages to both travellers and the country that they visited. Do Advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.
it is true that nowadays turisum has become a important part in substainable
development in globlisation.It facilated the both trouists as well as host country. it over come the disadvantages.I persinally believe that it might aid in many different ways.
first and formost reason is that tourisum inhence the knowledge of individuals itself. Especially, students who come and vists historical places of other country and observe the munoments. Secondly, trvellers mostly engoy there vaccations in different countries.
Nevertheless, international travel not only benefit traveller but also host country as well. Like it breaks the barries of counties and rise piece and harmony. economic as well as social development of the country. Moreover, tourisum has become one of the source of country capital.
coin has two sides, over the merits there are some dismerits as well. To name many but few are , tourists behaviour towards host nation show inrespectful . For intance, throwing gargbage on the road .
To recapiculate, I would only says that tourisum is important mediun ot unity the countries togethers.