IELTS General Writing Task 2

IELTS writing tasks' topics, answers, and comments.

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By ABCD, 2019-01-26  
Band: NA (Total words: 175)
Comment:
  • The essay is less than 250, doesn't match the basic criteria.
  • The introduction seems long, refine sentences.
  • The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 2 as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Conclusion seems too plain, try to polish it.
 IELTS General Writing Task 2 - Topic, Answer, and Comment
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose.

Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

You should write at least 250 words.
Zoo, not just a word or place for many people but an old album which brings back a whole lot of happy memories associated with the place called Zoo. I can’t imagine a decent sized city without a zoo. Zoo is a place where kids visit and experience the seeing of a real animal. How does a real lion look and roar? The real size of the animals, their features how they actually sound. Kids can’t have such unforgettable experience if the zoo doesn’t exist anymore.

I defer with the Animal rights and their freedom as well. We as a human have no right to capture these fierce though beautiful animals for mere amusement. These animals belong to jungle without a question.

In my opinion, we should have more of jungle safari where animals can have their own space and people can have their real life experience by seeing them in a natural ground.

It’s has no useful purpose other than entertaining people and catering a certain type of industry.