IELTS General Writing Task 2

IELTS writing tasks' topics, answers, and comments.

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By NMS, 2018-07-31  
Band: NA (Total words: 318)
Comment:
  • The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Introduction as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Introduction seems too plain, try to polish it.
 IELTS General Writing Task 2 - Topic, Answer, and Comment
Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.
school is not only a place for formal education ,it also help the pupil to inculcate moral values,importance of culture and many more qualities to become a responsible citizen.It is often argued that school uniform in secondary schools should be mandatory or not. I strongly agree with this notion and I personally feel school authorities must deal with this matter in a crucial way.
To begin with, wearing a uniform teaches student to dress smartly and take a pride in their appearance. Perhaps most importantly, they don't have to worry about how they look ,as every one is in similar dress. Moreover it gives a feeling of oneness and create a conducive environment, where the child can study rather than worrying about the look, or thinking about the financial burden on their parents.For example, in this modern world, technologies and style factors are advancing rapidly.This badly influences the younger ones ,so if the school is lenient with the pupils with the regards of uniform, most of the parents may struggle to purchase casual dress of current style.Thus,it is necessary to have uniforms in schools.

Furthermore, students in uniform looks more tidy and formal. Teachers' plays a crucial role here , its their responsibility to control the students and teach all vital aspects of being neat and tidy. if the students are in uniform,as it enhances the neatness of the class, teachers can concentrate on the cognitive development of the child. yet in another scenario, they have to waste tie on solving the issues raised from discrepancy.For instance, kids from rich families may tease his mate, who belong to a poor family and eventually a major fight between them.Hence, uniforms have to be made compulsory in school.

By and large , wearing uniform in school is beneficial, as it removes disparity among pupils and develop harmony.Therefore , all secondary school students should wear uniforms.