IELTS General Writing Task 2

IELTS writing tasks' topics, answers, and comments.

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By sandip, 2019-01-16  
Band: NA (Total words: 361)
Comment:
  • The essay is too long, suggest to shrink it.
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has SCHOOL(13) AND(11) THEIR(8); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Introduction as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Paragraph 3 seems too plain, try to polish it.
  • Suggest to refine coherence and cohesion by removing wordy linking words.
 IELTS General Writing Task 2 - Topic, Answer, and Comment
Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.
school play a crucial role in every one's life because it is a place where pupil learn a lot of skills.So, all institutes have their own rules and regulations in which school uniform is must.It is show the equality for all people and there do not do any type of difference between the region, cast and society status.Ergo, there are plethora of reasons behind this statement and also many solutions to solve this problem. i will discuss further in details with my own point of view.

To begin with, school dress is one of the most important element for all pupils in school. However, in this modern era, there are three type of pupil in the school like rich, middle poor and poor. if school allow to student to wear a dress according their preference then it make a difference between them because poor student family have to affordable to buy a expensive cloth for their children.As well as, sometime the feel very aggressive due to their dressing sense.Moreover, many of them make a joke on it.Therefore, wearing uniform have to built a confidence of student.

Furthermore, it is the identification of school reputation and people easily to find out the school where they learn. For instant, in a competition, many schools have been participated to earn name and fame.At that time they will be recognize by the uniform because the school logo also tag on dress.Apart from this, teacher teach equally without any difference. Also, those pupil can achieve their goal without any hesitation and demonstrate.

According to my perspective, all student have to right to complete their study even they belong to lower cast and have not high status in society. Even thought government also provide the school uniform in the government school for remove the problem. while many of them do not reach the learning center due to their uniform.

in conclusion, school uniform always built a strong connection between the student and teaches. when they wear it they stand on equal row. As well, they feel proud on it because every body know to them according their school dress not cast and society status.