Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18

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Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option?
Answer 1
We are experiencing a surge of criminal offenses, from physical, social, and even cyber crimes. Youngsters under 18 are playing an important part in the trend...

Nowadays, people have a hectic lifestyle. They are engaged primarily in professional life, so there is little room for family life and recreation...

On the other hand, there are so many other factors that could make the scenario worse. The use of the cyber world and the addiction to online social media are arguably some of them...

In a nutshell. I certainly believe that day by day, more youngsters are engaged in anti-social activities...
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