TOPIC: As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Improving the economy signifies prospering businesses. This increased profitability of these growing businesses demands a contribution towards their social responsibilities as well. I firmly believe that even a little step from them can make a huge change when it comes to society.
Today many large corporates have ...
Total words: 300
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