IELTS Academic Essay Answers

Test materials of writing task 2: The shortage of housing has severe social consequences in many cities. Only the government can solve the problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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 IELTS Academic Essay Answers - #2200319
Question:
The shortage of housing has severe social consequences in many cities. Only the government can solve the problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Answer 1
Noways, according to the larger population densities, the limited amount of housing has raised people's concern. Someone suggests that it is the only government that can resolve the problems. I completely agree with this statement.
The most important relates to housing can cause traffic congestions, as the increase ...
By Siiiiiiilvia , 2020-04-28  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 354
Band: 5
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Language skills are ok, but your points may risk your score. E.g. you say "governments ... let people...", many raters think "government by people"; besides, "One baby" isn't a policy of Indian.