IELTS Academic Essay Answers

Test materials of writing task 2: Some people say it wastes time to plan for the future; it is more important to focus on the present. Do you agree or disagree?

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 IELTS Academic Essay Answers - #2200330
TOPIC: Some people say it wastes time to plan for the future; it is more important to focus on the present. Do you agree or disagree?
Answer 1
Since the time human beings started living a civilized life, they have probably been planning for the future. Indulging in agriculture and animal rearing are two examples of the earliest simple planning. I believe that while forethought is necessary, it is critical to act in the present, for it is present that lays the ...
By Shivangi Jain, 2020-05-06  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 295
AI Comment:
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 2 as start point.
  • Obvious Grammar Errors: 7.
Tutor Comment:
Band 6.5
Good essay. But it can focus on the question more precisely. Besides, too many rare words may hurt your score. like "Sans planning, it would be a Herculean task to progress."
Answer 2
Planning for the future has become a debatable issue for all humanity. Some people believe that instead of worrying future, they should live in the present. However, opponents argue that they make some strategy to succeed in the future. Although I disagree with this notion, everyone has a right to think about their ...
By jarry, 2020-05-16  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 372
AI Comment:
  • The essay is too long, suggest to shrink it.
  • The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has FUTURE(10) PEOPLE(9) THAT(9); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 3 as start point.
  • Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Introduction seems too plain, try to polish it.
  • Obvious Grammar Errors: 0.
Tutor Comment:
Band 6.5
Good essay; especially personal experience easily impress raters. But the conclusion is too simple.
Answer 3
There is no double that we only live once. While certain people consider it is not worthy of spending time on planning for the future, instead they argue it is wiser to live in the moment. I personally do not agree with this attitude. Here I am going to give you my reasons.
First of all, things can be done more ...
By Nikky, 2020-05-18  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 294
AI Comment:
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Introduction as start point.
  • Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Paragraph 2 seems too plain, try to polish it.
  • Obvious Grammar Errors: 2.
Tutor Comment:
Band 6
Good essay; logic and reasoning are ok, although "weather" isn't a good example here. Some obvious grammar errors should be avoided.
Answer 4
People have different views about arranging their development. Some people think to focus on the present is more important than have a long term plan. In my opinion, considering the future is one of a vital thing in life.
Completely planing can make people have a clear direction in their life. For our personal ...
By Debbie, 2020-05-07  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 270
AI Comment:
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has AND(7) PEOPLE(6) CAN(6); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 2 as start point.
  • Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Paragraph 1 seems too plain, try to polish it.
  • Obvious Grammar Errors: 3.
Tutor Comment:
Band 5.5
Good essay, clear and fluent. If adding some examples or personal experiences, it should be more persuasive.
Answer 5
Mapping for the future is an intelligent way to get success in hand quickly. However, some people's thinking is better to give priority to focus on the present rather than planning for the future. This essay will emphasize describing the importance of future planning.
I dispute the statement because a man, no plan, ...
By Hossain, 2020-05-13  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 266
AI Comment:
  • The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 1 as start point.
  • Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Conclusion seems too plain, try to polish it.
  • Obvious Grammar Errors: 3.
Tutor Comment:
Band 5
You need to improve your grammar. (https://www.examword.com/elementary-grammar/) Besides, not to use the negative example of your classmate.