Ordinary people cannot solve the environmental problem in the world because they can do little to change the situation

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Question:
Ordinary people cannot solve the environmental problem in the world because they can do little to change the situation. It is the responsibility of politicians. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Answer 1
Environmental problems such as ice melting and the greenhouse effect have become increasingly severe in recent decades...

To begin with, we should shoulder the obligation to take care of our unique and single earth. If rubbish were thrown here and there, the globe would become a horrible garbage yard, an irreversible disaster for the whole ecosystem, which is hardly imagined...

Furthermore, it's widely accepted that citizens' notions positively impact governments' environmental strategies and companies' decisions...

The authorities and large firms have the possession to contribute to our environmental improvement as well...

In summary, both parts of the powers need to be taken seriously. People acting as participants bring about the change reflected by the accumulated small efforts of every citizen...
Band: 7
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Answer 2
As time goes by, more and more people realize that our problems related to the environment are not solved by having a division in opinion...

I think that people who can make crucial decisions, such as leaders or presidents, should pass and enforce laws that require all citizens to pay attention to environmental issues like air or water pollution since, if a law is passed in place by the authorities, people will follow and obey it...

On the other hand, I suppose it is essential to take heed of ordinary people living in societies. No significant change can be made if people do not increase their sense of responsibility and belonging towards the environment or nature...

In conclusion, I know that solving environmental problems is controversial and debatable and requires people's and the government's attention...
Band: 6.5
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All Words34717751%
Top 300 Words179 (51%)65 (36%)36%
300 - 1000 Words69 (19%)40 (22%)57%
Over 1000 Words99 (28%)72 (40%)72%
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Link Words: 33 (including link phrase: 3)
Sentences: Number: 16; Average Length: 134 characters; Words/Sentence: 21
Suggestions:
IELTS Essay Format:
-The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
-You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has and(19), people(15), environment(6), for(6), that(5), problems(5), can(5); try to decrease duplicated words.
-High-ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing; suggest rephrasing some.
-Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level.
-Suggest refining coherence and cohesion by removing wordy linking words.
Task Response:
-This is a well-organized essay, presenting ideas on both sides and developing these ideas effectively throughout the response.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-It is a good response that would achieve an even higher score if you refine some wordy sentences.
Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though there are some errors in word choice.
Answer 3
There is a contentious argument over whether an ordinary person can fix the environmental issue globally as their contribution is minor to the ongoing problem...

The main reason why I believe this is because using harmful plastic and chemicals severely damages the earth...

Another reason why I support this notion is that deforestation and water pollution from dumping waste around the world are accountable to people...

In conclusion, I can't entirely agree that politicians are crucial in solving environmental issues...
Band: 6
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Answer 4
There is a school of thought that the environmental problem could only be solved by politicians who are very powerful at policymaking, and ordinary people are useless at doing the same things...

However, I can't entirely agree with this opinion. I believe individuals and politicians are important in addressing the environmental problem; we cannot ignore their power...

Another point is that individuals and politicians should work together to address the environmental problem...

All in all, to deal with the environmental problem, individuals and politicians should work together...
Band: 6
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