The key to solving the environmental problem is simple：the present generation is willing to accept a less comfortable life for the sake of the future generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that the environmental problem is burgeoning at an exponential pace, and it is the onus of people to curb these issues to save the life of the next progeny. I agree with this notion that people are doing their best to reduce environmental issues in the upcoming paragraphs.
Undoubtedly, technology ...
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Band: 6.5The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.Task Response:
-The main ideas are relevant, but some are insufficiently developed.Coherence and Cohesion:
-The organization is logical, and there is a clear central topic to each paragraph.Lexical Resources:
-The range of vocabulary is quite wide and shows awareness of collocation, but there are rather too many errors for a higher band here.Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-Use a variety of complex structures, but the writing lacks strong grammatical control.
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