Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspapers remain the main source of news for the majority of people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Question:
Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspapers remain the main news source for some people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Answer Hints:
View topic. Disagree the statement is relatively easy to write. You may discuss why people don't need traditional newspapers. If you agree, you should discuss why people need it. Don't write about the good or bad of the newspaper.

Key Points
  • The popularization of mobile phones and other portable devices has a broader reading market.
  • Get news faster and more fully By Internet.
  • Online news has various functions to suit people's needs.
  • Newspaper isn't flexible to reflect break news.
  • Traditional newspapers are more expensive but lower quality to read.
other Points
  • Traditional newspapers can save money by switching to the Internet to maintain the quality of news.
  • Paper newspapers can exist as a supplement of digital media for those who have obstacles to reading non-newspaper electronic materials.
Answer 1
Some people think traditional newspapers are still the primary option for reading the news. I can't entirely agree with the statement because newspapers are less convenient, while online news is easily procured...

First, with the chief reasons why most of the population will prefer the internet, overshadowing the old newspaper, online news is more convenient in various ways...

Moreover, the benefits of online sources significantly surpass those of printed ones due to technological advances, as they present myriad reasons to replace newspapers...

In conclusion, despite newspapers traditionally holding an essential role in spreading the news to the door, I firmly believe that online news will keep ruling over newspaper popularity amongst the public, considering its advantageous outcomes...
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All Words32917452%
Top 300 Words148 (44%)50 (28%)33%
300 - 1000 Words47 (14%)33 (18%)70%
Over 1000 Words134 (40%)91 (52%)67%
Other Comments (jhalakbakshi)
Link Words: 15 (including link phrase: 5)
Sentences: Number: 13; Average Length: 167 characters; Words/Sentence: 25
Suggestions:
IELTS Essay Format:
-You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has news(9), online(9), for(8), are(5), newspapers(4), that(4), public(4); try to decrease duplicated words.
-High-ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing; suggest rephrasing some.
-Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level.
-You can improve coherence and cohesion by sharpening sentences and paragraphs with accurate linking words.
Task Response:
-This is a well-organized essay, presenting ideas on both sides and developing these ideas effectively throughout the response.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Each paragraph has a precise, developed central topic, and there is an effective use of cohesive devices, but a few sentences are wordy.
Lexical Resources:
-The lexical resource is sufficient to allow some flexibility and precision, although there are a few choice errors.