Some people think that traditional newspapers are still the primary option to read the news. I can't entirely agree with the statement because newspapers are less convenient, while online news is instantly procured easily.
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Band: 7The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.Task Response:
-This is a well-organized essay, presenting ideas on both sides, developing these ideas effectively throughout the response.Coherence and Cohesion:
-Each paragraph has a clear central topic, which is developed, and there is an effective use of cohesive devices, but a few sentences are wordy.Lexical Resources:
-The lexical resource is sufficient to allow some flexibility and precision, and although there are a few choice errors.Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and although errors occur, they rarely reduce communication.