Some people think public libraries are necessary, others believe that the public libraries are useless. What is your opinion and provide some relevant examples?
Discussion topic, you can choose a position. The first position on this topic is the benefits of free libraries. The second position is that everyone can obtain information online, and physical libraries waste money.
The first position
- Everyone has a place to read;
- Build reading skills and selected resources;
- Organize various activities;
- Increase the exchange among community members;
- Lower-level people can gain knowledge;
- Reduce social inequality
The second point
- Get information on the Internet;
- People don’t need to go to the library to get information
- Building a library is a waste of money;
In the contemporary era, there is a heated argument regarding the existence of public libraries. The lion's share of people favors it; however, the rest averse it. I believe that public libraries have been playing an indispensable role in the welfare of society, and the following paragraphs would support my opinion ...
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Band: 6The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Writing is good, but not like an IELTS essay, which had better be in a more formal style to convince others with facts and logic.
The public library has been one of the most popular destinations for people in the nearby community. However, it has always been the point of debate for people whether libraries are necessary or not. In this essay, we will discuss the various factors why the library is essential for people.
The library has been ...
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Band: 5.5The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Structure and reasoning are ok. But the library's activities aren't very persuasive, try other examples. Besides, the original version has too heavy grammar errors.
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