Health experts claim that walking is the best exercise

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 IELTS Academic Essay Answers - #7022
Question:
Health experts claim that walking is the best exercise. However, people are walking less on a daily basis. What has made this happen and how to deal with it?
Answer 1
Undoubtedly, walking is a good form of physical exercise to keep the body healthy and fit, but these days people walk less. Primarily due to the advancement in transportation and insecurity in public due to the high crime rate. This essay will elaborate on these significant issues and provide the best solutions to ...
By Jasmeen, 2021-03-30  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 350
Band: 7
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-All parts of the prompt are addressed, and a clear position is presented throughout the response.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-A range of cohesive devices is used flexibly, while each paragraph has a clear central topic that is developed.
Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though there are some sentences wordy.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a variety of complex structures with frequent error-free sentences and good control over grammar and punctuation.
Answer 2
People seem to be increasingly reluctant to have a walk regularly. As there are certain causes of such a trend, some solutions are also available to urge people to walk more.
Among the reasons for the lack of people's interest in the walking activity, modern technology's convenience in traveling and the boredom of ...
By Nidhi Singh, 2021-04-01  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 291
Band: 7
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-All parts of the prompt are addressed, and a clear position is presented throughout the response, but the Introduction is weak or too simple.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Ideas are logically organized, and there is a clear progression throughout the response.
Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a good range of complex structures, and many sentences have accurate grammar and punctuation, but use too many passive voice sentences.
Answer 3
Walking has been a part of human history for a long time, either for a tedious job such as hunting in ancient times or for a fitness regime in modern times. Hence it is even recommended by doctors to walk daily to reap its ever-increasing health benefits. But due to modernisations and current developments, the number ...
By simran singh, 2021-03-28  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 341
Band: 6.5
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-The solution part is too weak; the essay's structure isn't balanced.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Each paragraph has a clear central topic, which is developed, and there is an effective use of cohesive devices.
Lexical Resources:
-The range of vocabulary is sufficient to allow some flexibility and precision, and it shows an awareness of styles and collocation.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a wide range of structures, these are used flexibly; however, there are occasional errors.
Answer 4
A daily walk of 30 minutes is said to be the best exercise. Our grandparents used to walk for miles on end to reach their destination. Today, people walk much less. Many factors are responsible for this.
In the developed world, most families have cars. They do not walk even to the nearest grocery store. In the ...
By sahibjeet singh, 2021-03-31  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 313
Band: 6
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-All parts of the prompt are addressed, and a clear position is presented throughout the response.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Each paragraph has a clear central topic, which is developed, and there is an effective use of cohesive devices.
Lexical Resources:
-The lexical resource is limited, but just about adequate for the task, try to enhance IELTS vocabulary.
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Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a good range of complex structures, and many sentences have accurate grammar and punctuation.
Answer 5
Simple walking itself is considered the easiest way to exercise; unfortunately, people stop walking enough because of progressive technologies. In this essay, I will open some of the reasons why it is most probably happens and what we can do to bring back walking into our daily routine.
First of all, let's see how ...
By Tamy, 2021-04-01  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 306
Band: 6
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-The solution part is too weak; the essay's structure isn't balanced. "Fitbit" isn't a good example.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-The organization is logical, and there is a clear central topic to each paragraph.
Lexical Resources:
-The lexical resource is limited, but just about adequate for the task, try to enhance IELTS vocabulary.
- Help Link
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, with a fair degree of accuracy.
Answer 6
Since ancient times, the fundamental principle to remain fit and live a healthy life is in doing physical exercises regularly. These exercises help attain a good physique and improve the metabolism and blood circulation in the body. According to health professionals, strolling daily has a great value in maintaining ...
By Amit puri, 2021-04-01  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 322
Band: 6
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-All parts of the prompt are addressed, and a position is presented that is directly relevant to the prompt, but the introduction is too long, rephrase the paragraph.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-The organization is evident and cohesive devices are used, though rather mechanically.
Lexical Resources:
-The lexical resource is limited, but just about adequate for the task, try to enhance IELTS vocabulary.
- Help Link
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-Use a variety of complex structures, but the writing lacks grammatical control.
Answer 7
The best workout to be fit and healthy is walking. Nowadays, a regular walk has become rare. This essay illustrates reasons why people have decreased walking and what should be done to improve this situation.
First, the number of people walking daily is reduced due to having no proper area to walk and lack of time. ...
By rithiksunny, 2021-04-07  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 250
Band: 5.5
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-The main ideas are relevant, but some are insufficiently developed.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-There is a clear overall progression in the response, but somewhat mechanically, with occasional errors.
Lexical Resources:
-The lexical resource is limited, but just about adequate for the task, try to enhance IELTS vocabulary.
- Help Link
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and although errors occur, they rarely reduce communication.