Many people think that the best way to learn a culture is to learn its language

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 IELTS Academic Essay Answers - #7028
Question:
Many people think that the best way to learn a culture is to learn its language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Answer 1
Culture plays a significant role in today's societies, and many people are curious about other cultures...

To begin with, there are many reliable sources and ways to know any culture around the world. One of the easiest ways is through the internet and social media...

In my perspective, I think the most efficient way to learn about other people's cultures is to immerse yourself in their language and interact with them...

In conclusion, despite the ongoing argument, studying the language is the optimal way to know its speaker's culture...
Band: 6.5
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Word Statistics
GroupWord NumberDistinctPercent
All Words29613946%
Top 300 Words168 (56%)55 (39%)32%
300 - 1000 Words57 (19%)34 (24%)59%
Over 1000 Words71 (23%)50 (35%)70%
Other Comments (aliaqlan)
Link Words: 29 (including link phrase: 2)
Sentences: Number: 15; Average Length: 120 characters; Words/Sentence: 19
Suggestions:
IELTS Essay Format:
-The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
-You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has and(15), about(10), culture(8), their(8), are(5), other(5), learn(5); try to decrease duplicated words.
-High-ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing; suggest rephrasing some.
-Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level.
-Suggest refining coherence and cohesion by removing wordy linking words.
Task Response:
-Don't express a clear position in the first half of the essay; off-topic 'best way' a little.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-It is a good response that would achieve an even higher score if there was consistent logic.
Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though there are some errors in word choice.
Answer 2
Many nowadays think the best way to learn other people's cultures and habits is to learn their language...

Such a conservative point of view is partly true for the scholars, experts, and scientists who wish to investigate overseas ancient nations' specific customs and details of their national holidays, depicted in their historical documents and the work of famous people...

Books and documentaries about certain national cultures and life are helpful tools. Still, their importance pales with the comparison with the real-life overseas both work and life experience...

In conclusion, rare instant aside, when learning a foreign language is essential to understand the overseas culture, in most cases, life experience is a better predictor of the successful acquisition of helpful knowledge related to the specifics of culture...
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Answer 3
Culture is a unique feature of society that is bonded with emotions. Many people say that a better understanding of the culture will be possible only through the language that culture represents...

In my view, culture is the mixture of several elements, including rituals, religious practices, values, arts, food, etc...

In addition, many of our writers published some extraordinary literature about the various cultures in the world that we are not familiar with...

In conclusion, language plays a vital role in culture, and learning the culture is especially not mandatory...
Band: 6
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