Some people think the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others believe that it is a waste of money since people can access the Internet to obtain information.

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Some people think the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others believe it is a waste of money since people can access the Internet to obtain information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Answer Hints:
Discussion views of both sides, you can choose a position. You need to discuss two sides and focus on if free libraries waste money.

The first view
  • Everyone has a place to read in town;
  • Build reading skills and offer lots of selected resources;
  • Organize various activities in person;
  • Increase the exchange among community members;
  • Reduce social inequality, especially for kids;
The second view
  • People don't need to go to a physical library to get information
  • Get information on the Internet is cheap and convenient;
  • Building and running a physical library need much more money and resources;
Answer 1
Many nowadays think that authorities should provide free libraries to urban dwellers. In contrast, others see this effort as a squander of the government budget, as the current generation has access to the information via the World Wide Web...

Public library advocates often point to the countless facts that support libraries' significance for urban citizens...

Nevertheless, despite some valuable arguments, the modern world has changed dramatically over the past decades...

In conclusion, rare instant aside, where libraries could be a valuable tool for the narrow specialist in most cases, libraries lost their power...
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