The Internet has changed the way people interact and get surrounding information. More and more people prefer social media to exchange thoughts and ideas and attain news from networks. Even though there are a few drawbacks of the trend, the advantages are far more.
First of all, the primary advantage of social media ...
Band: 8The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.Task Response:
-Ideas relating to each sector mentioned in the prompt are presented, All parts of the prompt are addressed, and a clear position is presented throughout the response.Coherence and Cohesion:
-The writing is well organized, and there is clear progression throughout, although the use of some cohesive devices could be more flexible.Lexical Resources:
-There is a good range of vocabulary, and there are some less common words and phrases.Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-A variety of complex structures is used with some flexibility and accuracy.