Some people think it is a better way to leave their home country to improve their work and living opportunities, while others think staying in their own country is a better choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
You need to discuss the points of the two sides. It's an open topic; you can choose either side as your opinion. Note that there are comparatives in the question, so pay attention to the comparison in your support.
- Leave the home country for a more affluent country
- Leave the home country for a place where your skill is rare
- Work and life opportunities are better
- Stay in the country without language barriers and cultural differences
- Look for a suitable city or job
- Have more opportunities for stable work and life
In globalization, many individuals tend to migrate to other places as they reach maturity; however, others prefer to live in their hometowns for the rest of their lives. In this essay, we will discuss both sides, followed by my opinion on this topic.
On the one hand, a different environment means new life and ...
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