It's more important for school children to learn about their local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree？
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It's more important for school children to learn about their local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree？
It's more important for school children to learn about their local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree？
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It's an agree or disagree question. For political correctness, you had better agree with it. Besides, your examples should be nice for international readers.
It's an agree or disagree question. For political correctness, you had better agree with it. Besides, your examples should be nice for international readers.
Local History
- Learn one's own history and experience
- Be familiar with cultural roots
- Develops a sense of cultural identity.
World History
- Broaden horizons, learn the history, customs, and culture of different countries
- Study the achievements of other countries
- Get along well with people from other countries.
Answer 1
Some think domestic history is more important for schoolchildren than world history. In my opinion, I agree with this view. But I also believe that children learning about stories of other countries will help them understand their own history.
On the one hand, I am in favor of the idea that studying own national ...
On the one hand, I am in favor of the idea that studying own national ...
By Neya Sha, 2022-06-12 View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 308
Band: 7
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.Task Response:
-Ideas relating to each sector mentioned in the prompt are presented, but there is not much development of some; you had better use generic examples for international readers.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Each paragraph has a clear central topic, which is developed, and there is an effective use of cohesive devices.
Lexical Resources:
-The lexical resource is sufficient to allow some flexibility and precision, and although there are a few spelling errors.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and although errors occur, they rarely reduce communication.