It is difficult for people who live in cities to get enough physical exercise. What causes and solutions can be taken to solve the problem?

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Question:
It is difficult for people who live in cities to get enough physical exercise. What causes and solutions can be taken to solve the problem?
Answer Hints:
The topic needs you to answer causes and solutions. You also need to pay attention to the connections of causes and solutions you rasied.

Causes
  • Please ignore or don't know the importance of physical exercise.
  • Busy in working and job, no time to spend on physical exercise.
  • Diverse entertainment decreases the time for physical exercise.
  • Cities generally lack land and facilities for physical exercise.
Solutions
  • Governments promote physical exercise to add awareness.
  • Add physical exercise facilities in communities.
  • Add cycle lanes or walk side to promote a green and healthy lifestyle.
  • Encorage people to live a balanced life, leaving time for leisure, especially for physical exercise.
Answer 1
Residents of cities are indeed hard to get sufficient physical activities. There are several causes of this issue, and some solutions could be proposed to help people to promote the rate of physical exercise.
There are many reasons why most people feel hard in exercising although they all know it is suitable for ...
By Starte Gates, 2022-07-25  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 259
Band: 7
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-Ideas relating to each sector mentioned in the prompt are presented, but there is not much development of some. E.g. it's easy to add some examples to both cause and solution parts.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Ideas are logically organized, and there is a clear progression throughout the response.
Lexical Resources:
-The range of vocabulary is quite wide and shows awareness of collocation.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a good range of complex structures, and many sentences have accurate grammar and punctuation.