Adults who cannot read or write are disadvantaged in today's society. The inability to read or write makes it challenging for them to improve their economic and social standing. There are many things government can do to help them.
One of the most significant disadvantages of illiteracy is the limited job ...
Band: 7.5The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.Task Response:
-Ideas relating to each sector mentioned in the prompt are presented, but there is not much development of some.Coherence and Cohesion:
-The organization is logical, and there is a clear central topic to each paragraph.Lexical Resources:
-There is a wide range of vocabulary, used appropriately and naturally. But a few sentences are wordy to show grammar or vocabulary skills. Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-A variety of complex structures is used with some flexibility and accuracy.