IELTS General Writing Task 2

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 IELTS General Writing Task 2 - Study and Practice:My Essay   
Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.

Do you agree or disagree?

Provide relevant examples if necessary.

Write at least 250 words.
Some people prefer a high salary job no matter if like it. From my point, I completely disagree with this opinion and believe that job satisfaction is more important than a big...
By Drhema Thu, 2017-12-03  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: NA (Total words: 289)
Comment:
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has AND(11) MORE(8) JOB(6); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Conclusion as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Paragraph 1 seems too plain, try to polish it.
It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose a job with high wage, even if it doesn't appeal to you at all. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that...
By Hans Goredy, 2017-10-03  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: 9 (Total words: 280)
Comment:
  • The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Introduction as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Conclusion seems too plain, try to polish it.
  • Suggest to refine coherence and cohesion by removing wordy linking words.