Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties, and other celebrations is just a waste of money
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Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties, and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others think that these are necessary for individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties, and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others think that these are necessary for individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Answer 1
Some people like celebrating special days with parties, like birthdays and marriage. Is it to waste money and not any merits...
A few argue that special events must be celebrated grandly, as they happen only a few times a lifetime...
On the other hand, some people believe that it is not right to spend a considerable amount of money on personal celebrations as there are a lot of people across the globe under starvation...
Considering the memories of special occasions and starvation, spending much money on parties has been supported and refuted by many...
A few argue that special events must be celebrated grandly, as they happen only a few times a lifetime...
On the other hand, some people believe that it is not right to spend a considerable amount of money on personal celebrations as there are a lot of people across the globe under starvation...
Considering the memories of special occasions and starvation, spending much money on parties has been supported and refuted by many...
Band: 7.5
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IELTS Essay Format:
-You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has and(9), people(7), money(6), that(5), some(4), special(4), parties(4); try to decrease duplicated words.
-High-ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing; suggest rephrasing some.
-Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level.
IELTS Essay Format:
-You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has and(9), people(7), money(6), that(5), some(4), special(4), parties(4); try to decrease duplicated words.
-High-ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing; suggest rephrasing some.
-Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level.
Answer 2
Throwing parties can be expensive. While some people do not find these fancy parties worth their cost, others believe parties are essential to individuals and society...
People choose to throw parties for a number of reasons. For starters, parties can make better teams...
Moreover, parties often leave good memories. From our own experiences, we all have happy memories of our birthday parties when we were little...
The popularity of parties, however, causes some tension in the society. Parties are hard on introverted people who find themselves uncomfortable in parties...
In my opinion, while a party is a social event that benefits individuals and society, other choices should also be considered, either to cut spending or relieve the stress of those not fond of parties...
People choose to throw parties for a number of reasons. For starters, parties can make better teams...
Moreover, parties often leave good memories. From our own experiences, we all have happy memories of our birthday parties when we were little...
The popularity of parties, however, causes some tension in the society. Parties are hard on introverted people who find themselves uncomfortable in parties...
In my opinion, while a party is a social event that benefits individuals and society, other choices should also be considered, either to cut spending or relieve the stress of those not fond of parties...
Band: 7
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