IELTS General Writing Task 2

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 IELTS General Writing Task 2 - Study and Practice:My Essay   
In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they like.

To what extent should children have to follow rules?

Write at least 250 words.
Children education relies on country and culture. While some prefer to encourage kids to express in freedom, some believe strict rules can help kids learn fast. Generation by...
By Anuone Sun, 2017-11-11  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: NA (Total words: 249)
Comment:
  • The essay is less than 250, doesn't match the basic criteria.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Conclusion as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Introduction seems too plain, try to polish it.
  • Suggest to refine coherence and cohesion by removing wordy linking words.
The extent to which children have to follow rules is in itself a very complex issue, since children across the world grow up in very different cultures. In India for example,...
By Ryan Higgins, 2017-10-03  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: 8 (Total words: 303)
Comment:
  • The introduction seems long, refine sentences.
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has CHILDREN(10) RULES(8) AND(8); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Conclusion as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Conclusion seems too plain, try to polish it.
  • Suggest to refine coherence and cohesion by removing wordy linking words.