Some people say that zoos have no useful purpose. Others believe that zoos are beneficial in many ways.
Discuss and give your opinion.
You should write at least 250 words.
Keeping wild animals in cages is a tradition for a long; it's fun for people and educational for kids. However, some others think it to be a very inhuman act. This is a much...
By Rashedul Islam, 2017-11-05
Band: NA (Total words: 344)
- The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
- Paragraph 3 is relatively short, enrich it.
- You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has AND(20) ANIMALS(12) FOR(8); try to decrease duplicated words.
- High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 2 as start point.
A diversity of animal species from leopards, eagles to lizards have been captured and kept in zoos across the globe for centuries. While this practice is considered pointless to...
By JiaBao Lam, 2017-10-03
Band: 8 (Total words: 284)
- High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Introduction as start point.