Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV

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Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. Do you agree or disagree?
Answer 1
It is believed that reading helps people develop imagination and language skills more than watching TV...

Firstly, reading books helps readers enhance their creativity and independent thinking abilities. For instance, when it comes to an image of a splendid architectural construction, some readers relate this detail to a building in Western style while others imagine an Eastern complex...

Secondly, literature is an effective method for people to boost their language skills. Indeed, since almost all published novels need to pass a careful editing process that ensures appropriate content and well-written words, writing skills can be enhanced with ideas from those books...

All in all, reading books benefits humans' creativity and language skills. Therefore, children should be encouraged to read books early for their development...
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Answer 2
While some people think that reading books rather than watching TV is more beneficial for one's imagination and language acquisition, I believe that the former's role in boosting intelligence and language ability is equal to the latter...

On the one hand, books enhance children's imagination and development. Children reading a fairy tale with illustrations must think, fantasize, and use their creativity to comprehend ideas and reasoning, sharpening their mental skills...

On the other hand, watching TV is considered an essential activity as reading to cultivate one's imaginativeness regarding the characteristics of programs...

In conclusion, while the benefits of reading are undeniable, they cannot outweigh the role of TV in enhancing a person's imagination and language skills...
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Answer 3
The trend of reading books has significantly decreased over the past few decades. In contrast, some postulate that reading books helps people improve skills such as imagination and language than watching television...

While reading novels and other storybooks, a person imagines the characters' personalities and looks...

On the other hand, while watching movies and videos on TV, one can imitate and practice the pronunciation and visualization of the expressions and emotions that improve the imagination and listening skills of the respective language...

To conclude, I would like to say that it is undeniable that book reading and watching TV programs impact one's linguistic and imagination skills in one way or another...
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