Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV.
Do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
It is believed that reading helps people develop imagination as well as language skill more than watching TV. Personally, I am convinced of that opinion for the following...
By Hangoc Nguyen, 2017-11-05
Band: NA (Total words: 279)
- The introduction isn't strong enough, suggest to enhance it.
- Suggest to refine coherence and cohesion by removing wordy linking words.
While some people think that reading books rather than watching TV is more beneficial for one’s imagination and language acquisition, I content that the role of the former in...
By Jiabao Lam, 2017-10-03
Band: NA (Total words: 308)
- The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
- High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 1 as start point.