IELTS General Writing Task 2

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 IELTS General Writing Task 2 - Study and Practice:My Essay   
Men do most of the high-level jobs. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women?

What is your opinion on that?

Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

You should write at least 250 words.
A basic fact is that 90 percent of the top positions are occupied by men across all companies in today's world. Although, I believe that women must be prepared to take over...
By Zuhr Vardi, 2017-11-05  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: NA (Total words: 283)
Comment:
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 2 as start point.
The high-level jobs have always been held by men. Whether it is the head of the state or the CEO of a multinational company historically its men who have conquered most of the...
By Vikram Soni, 2017-10-04  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: NA (Total words: 381)
Comment:
  • The essay is too long, suggset to shrink it.
  • The introduction seems long, refine sentences.
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has WOMEN(18) POSITIONS(10) FOR(9); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 2 as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Paragraph 2 seems too plain, try to polish it.