IELTS General Writing Task 2

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 IELTS General Writing Task 2 - Study and Practice:My Essay   
Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.
A school isn't just a place to offer lessons. For young people, it's a place to grow up, to build thought and behavior for their future lives. So, I think schools that require...
By Swarna Oliver, 2017-10-28  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: NA (Total words: 344)
Comment:
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has STUDENTS(13) THEIR(10) SCHOOL(8); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 2 as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Paragraph 1 seems too plain, try to polish it.
It is true that some secondary schools require their students to wear uniforms, while others allow their students to wear free clothing. Both policies have their own positive...
By Darwin Lesmana, 2017-10-04  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: NA (Total words: 290)
Comment:
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has STUDENTS(13) THAT(10) UNIFORMS(10); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 2 as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Introduction seems too plain, try to polish it.
I think that the issue whether all students are required to wear school uniform is the one that is open for debate. Some people think that all students must wear the school...
By Jiabao Lam, 2017-10-04  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: NA (Total words: 316)
Comment:
  • The introduction seems long, refine sentences.
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has WEAR(16) THAT(13) SCHOOL(13); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 2 as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Conclusion seems too plain, try to polish it.