IELTS General Essay Answers

Test materials of writing task 2: In the past, people used to get information from books. These days more and more people get it from the internet. Give reasons for your opinion and include any relevant examples.

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Question:
In the past, people used to get information from books. These days more and more people get it from the internet. Give reasons for your opinion and include any relevant examples.
Answer 1
Although it was a habit that people relied on trusted books to acquire new knowledge, nowadays, it has become more common to browse the internet to reach any information. In my opinion, this development has been followed because getting information on the internet is easier and faster.
The main reason why people ...
By Menna, 2020-07-13  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 288
Band: 6
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
The response is good in both logic and structure, but has some tiny syntax defects.
Answer 2
In this fast-paced world, news and information were thrown to us in every second. We can easily get information from the other end of the world in just the blink of an eye. We were so used to the fast-paced networking; we seldom sit and read to find an answer about anything since we have all sort of search engine to ...
By Tt, 2020-06-16  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 261
Band: 5.5
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
The response isn't matched with the question very well. You should try to give reasons and relevant examples to support the topic. Besides, the essay's vocabulary is too pale.
Answer 3
Although books were the main source of information in the past, with the advent of modern technologies, people's preferences have changed dramatically, and nowadays, online resources are in more demand than paper books. It is due to the easy access to Internet resources and outdated information in the majority of ...
By Farhad, 2020-09-06  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 302
Band: 5.5
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-The logic and reasoning look good, but some sentences seem wordy.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-The response is organized into paragraphs, but the focus of each is not always clear.
Lexical Resources:
-The lexical resource is limited, it's a big shortage in the task, try to enhance IELTS vocabulary.
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Answer 4
Since the revolution of the internet, there are myriad things like books and magazines that have dwindled as compared to the past. While I agree that the ease of access and globalization had mandate people to use the internet for everything, it goes without the internet is detrimental in many ways and yet to reach all ...
By AK, 2020-07-11  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 280
Band: 5
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
The response is ok in both logic and structure, but language skills need to be enhanced, especially you have too many wordy and wrong sentences.