IELTS General Essay Answers

Test materials of writing task 2: Most employers do job interviews before offering a position to a person. Do you think this is the best way to do it or are there better alternatives? What is the best method of choosing employees in your opinion?

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 IELTS General Essay Answers - #4200620
TOPIC: Most employers do job interviews before offering a position to a person. Do you think this is the best way to do it or are there better alternatives? What is the best method of choosing employees in your opinion?
Answer 1
A vast majority of recruiters conduct interviews in order to hire new workers. Although it can be considered an appropriate method, there are still other measures by which this can be done. I, however, believe that distinct methods should be adopted according to the type of job for which the staff is needed.
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By KM, 2020-07-13  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 287
AI Comment:
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 1 as start point.
  • Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Introduction seems too plain, try to polish it.
  • Obvious Grammar Errors: 0.
Tutor Comment:
Band 6
The response is excellent in both logic and structure, your language skills are good too, but passive voice sentences seem too many.
Answer 2
Choosing a correct employee has been a top priority for any organisation today. Conducting interviews plays a pivotal role in selecting the right employee and also considered as the old and best method. I agree with the given statement. I will also discuss other alternative methods that an employer could use to choose ...
By sairam nittala , 2020-07-13  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 279
AI Comment:
  • The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has AND(6) CANDIDATE(6) FOR(5); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Conclusion as start point.
  • Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Introduction seems too plain, try to polish it.
  • Obvious Grammar Errors: 9.
Tutor Comment:
Band 6
The response is excellent in both logic and structure, but you need to enhance vocabulary skills to get a better score.