Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why?
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Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why?
Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why?
Answer Hints:
Positive or negative question. If you choose it as "Positive" development, it's relatively easy to write.
Positive or negative question. If you choose it as "Positive" development, it's relatively easy to write.
Positive
- Robots can increase efficiency dramatically.
- Robots are more reliable for most common jobs.
- Save people from repeating labors to do creative tasks.
- Make life easy, and get more leisure time.
- Bring new industries and jobs to develop various robots.
Negative
- Some traditional laborers may lose jobs.
- Some craft by hand skills may disappear forever.
Answer 1
Nowadays, many people have started to use robots in their homes and work daily duties. Some consider it a positive development while others think it has only downsides...
First, using robots is considered a positive development because it makes life easier. Some tasks are easy and repetitive and could be programmed to be done by a robot, which decreases the stress and effort needed to be accomplished by humans...
Moreover, robotic jobs are more accurate than human ones. In the manufacturing industries, the automation of many tasks decreases human error, which improves job quality and the company's efficiency...
However, this development is considered harmful on the individual and societal levels since it will increase the unemployment rate and harm the country's economic and social situation...
In conclusion, replacing humans with robots should be well-monitored to keep its benefits outweighing its downsides and be considered a positive development without affecting the nations and their populations...
First, using robots is considered a positive development because it makes life easier. Some tasks are easy and repetitive and could be programmed to be done by a robot, which decreases the stress and effort needed to be accomplished by humans...
Moreover, robotic jobs are more accurate than human ones. In the manufacturing industries, the automation of many tasks decreases human error, which improves job quality and the company's efficiency...
However, this development is considered harmful on the individual and societal levels since it will increase the unemployment rate and harm the country's economic and social situation...
In conclusion, replacing humans with robots should be well-monitored to keep its benefits outweighing its downsides and be considered a positive development without affecting the nations and their populations...
Band: 6.5
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Answer 2
Technology is integral in making our existence more comfortable in this knowledge age. Consequently, applying robots has become very popular, from simple domestic household chores to more sophisticated daily tasks...
A robot's ability is rising beyond limits with ongoing research and development. They can take on tasks that are too dangerous for humans to perform or require deliberate precision, such as high-rise engineering projects, microscopic surgeries, and handling hazardous chemicals...
However, some downsides persist. For example, depending solely on robots might render people less productive and too lazy to perform housework...
In conclusion, it is logical that robots made our lives much more convenient than ever. Our responsibility is to make good use of them sensibly since the benefits they bring about can outshine their drawbacks...
A robot's ability is rising beyond limits with ongoing research and development. They can take on tasks that are too dangerous for humans to perform or require deliberate precision, such as high-rise engineering projects, microscopic surgeries, and handling hazardous chemicals...
However, some downsides persist. For example, depending solely on robots might render people less productive and too lazy to perform housework...
In conclusion, it is logical that robots made our lives much more convenient than ever. Our responsibility is to make good use of them sensibly since the benefits they bring about can outshine their drawbacks...
Band: 6
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| Group | Word Number | Distinct | Percent |
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| All Words | 230 | 153 | 66% |
| Top 300 Words | 91 (39%) | 40 (26%) | 43% |
| 300 - 1000 Words | 36 (15%) | 27 (17%) | 75% |
| Over 1000 Words | 103 (44%) | 86 (56%) | 83% |
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Link Words: 17 (including link phrase: 1)
Sentences: Number: 13; Average Length: 117 characters; Words/Sentence: 17
Suggestions:
IELTS Essay Format:
-The essay is less than 250, doesn't match the basic criteria.
-Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level.
Task Response:IELTS Essay Format:
-The essay is less than 250, doesn't match the basic criteria.
-Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level.
-You need to put forward more reasons for agreeing with the statement. 'Robot and war' isn't a reasonable or logical connection. But
the main ideas are extended and supported; the response is ok.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Each paragraph has a precise central topic, which is developed, and cohesive devices are effectively used.
Lexical Resources:
-The lexical resource is sufficient to allow some flexibility and precision.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a good range of complex structures, and many sentences have accurate grammar and punctuation.
Answer 3
The world progresses, and we evolve. Currently, we are at the peak of technology. Robots are used daily, and many individuals rely on the performance of these innovations in households and workplaces...
The rise of machines is due to the fact lives can be improved. Basic human tasks such as laundry, cooking, and cleaning take up most of our time...
Another cheerful development robots are taking is laborious and dangerous tasks. The higher the tasks induced labor, the more safety hazards would incur...
Having these innovative resources made jobs and chores easier despite having a few drawbacks. We should co-exist with science as the world grows without losing our human touch...
The rise of machines is due to the fact lives can be improved. Basic human tasks such as laundry, cooking, and cleaning take up most of our time...
Another cheerful development robots are taking is laborious and dangerous tasks. The higher the tasks induced labor, the more safety hazards would incur...
Having these innovative resources made jobs and chores easier despite having a few drawbacks. We should co-exist with science as the world grows without losing our human touch...
Band: 6
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