In many countries, the legal driving age is 18 years old

IELTS Writing Task 2 & Answer: In many countries, the legal driving age is 18 years old. Some people believe it is the right age to learn how to drive a car, whereas others say that the minimum age should be 25. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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 IELTS General Essay Answers - #6125
Question:
In many countries, the legal driving age is 18 years old. Some people believe it is the right age to learn how to drive a car, whereas others say that the minimum age should be 25. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Answer 1
Many nowadays are of the opinion that modern youngsters should not be allowed to drive a car until 25 years, while other claim that it is a legitimate reason to allow young drivers to get their driving licence after 18 years. This essay will discuss both perspectives but will aim to support the last opinion as modern ...
By Farid, 2021-04-13  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 412
Band: 7
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-All parts of the prompt are addressed, and a clear position is presented throughout the response.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Each paragraph has a clear central topic, which is developed, and there is an effective use of cohesive devices. But the essay is too long, and seems wordy.
Lexical Resources:
-There is a wide range of vocabulary, used appropriately and naturally.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, with a fair degree of accuracy.
Answer 2
In this developing world, motor cars become our essential companions in every aspect of our daily lives. As a result, people are keen on driving as early as possible upon stepping into their adulthood. Consequently, some people assert that the minimum legal driving age should be 18 years old, while others claim that 25 ...
By Fatty, 2021-06-01  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 302
Band: 7
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-The logic and reasoning look good, but some sentences seem wordy and not in the style that academic writing should be in.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Each paragraph has a clear central topic, which is developed, and there is an effective use of cohesive devices.
Lexical Resources:
-The range of vocabulary is sufficient to allow some flexibility and precision, and it shows an awareness of styles and collocation.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, with a fair degree of accuracy.
Answer 3
It is often argued about the minimum age to drive. Some people claim it to be 18 but some say that it should be 25. This essay illustrates the pros and cons of both statements and my personal opinion.
To begin with, many claim that the permissible age to drive can be 18 years. Nowadays driving has become compulsory. ...
By rithiksunny, 2021-04-07  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 294
Band: 6
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-You should present views from two sides by the question. The second paragraph seems have logic issue, refine it.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Ideas are generally arranged coherently, and there is a clear overall progression.
Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though there are some errors in word choice.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, with a fair degree of accuracy.