Students in university education should develop specialists in one subject area rather than create a broader range of subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Question:
Students in university education should develop specialists in one subject area rather than create a broader range of subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Answer Hints:
This is an open topic; you can agree or disagree with the statement.

Agree
  • Become a talent in a field quickly.
  • Easy to get a position in the crowded job market.
  • Can contribute or do more for society.
  • Didn't waste time or effort on unrelated stuff.
Disagree
  • University students are still too young to decide on their careers.
  • A broader range of subjects helps students change and achieve their goals.
  • Many jobs for young people welcome students with multiple subjects background.
  • Students are easy to build a job or career that matches their interests.
Answer 1
The debate over whether university students should specialize in one subject area or explore a broader range of subjects is longstanding. I agree to develop specialists in one subject area and will provide my points in the essay.
Firstly, specialization allows individuals to develop deep knowledge and expertise in a ...
By Wujuny Doors, 2023-04-13  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 251
Band: 7
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-Ideas are usually expressed fully, but they sometimes need more support. For this topic, adding one or two examples to support your points is easy.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Each paragraph has a clear central topic, which is developed, and there is an effective use of cohesive devices.
Lexical Resources:
-There is a good range of vocabulary, and there are some less common words and phrases
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a variety of complex structures with frequent error-free sentences and good control over grammar and punctuation.