IELTS Academic Writing Task 2

IELTS writing tasks' topics, answers, and comments.

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By liuba, 2018-12-08  
Band: NA (Total words: 278)
Comment:
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has ARE(5) FOOD(5) PARENTS(5); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • You can improve coherence and cohesion by sharpening sentences and paragraphs with accurate linking words.
 IELTS Academic Writing Task 2 - Topic, Answer, and Comment
In many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight.

What do you think are the causes of this?

What solutions can you suggest?

Write at least 250 words.
All adult people recognize the importance of raising healthy new generation, but nowadays more children are suffering of being overweight. Even through the causes of the problem are multiple, one of them - amount of food consumption is definitely the main. In my opinion, parents should prevent unhealthy kids habits and educate them to have a long and colorful life.

Some people have unhealthy attitudes to food that they transfer to their kids. For example, same as adult portion of food or meals in high calories and low in nutrition will not help children to be fit. In other words, burgers, candies, sugary drinks can not in the list of daily child consumption. Furthermore, physical inactivity together with lack nutrition knowledge to food choice are additional reasons for obesity. If parents preferred to watch TV after work with packet of french fries , most probably children would do the same.

Thinking about possible ways to resolve the problem of being overweight, it becomes clear that parents should pay attention on what child eats on a daily basis. For instance, fruits and vegetables, protein and high fiber products are the base of healthy food consumption. The whole family should have a habit of spending the spare time actively : long walks in the park, riding the bicycles , fintess , any physical exercises should be a part of life.

In conclusion, mainly parents , in my opinion, are responsible of overweight of their children. In order to help with obesity parents should choose active lifestyle together with right dietary behavior.