TOPIC: In some countries, celebrities earn higher salaries than senior politicians. What are the reasons? Is it a negative or positive development?
Pay structure is skewed in favour of famous personalities vis-a-vis Congressmen; rationalisations being plenty, can potentially cause negative outcomes.
Superstars' wages are justified by the nature of work, coupled with their global reach. As is common knowledge, celebrities like actors or sportspersons have had ...
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- You had better rewrite the essay to 4 or 5 paragraphs.
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Cannot catch the question, the language lacks academic, or say IELTS, style. The second paragraph needs to be rewritten.