IELTS Academic Essay Answers

Test materials of writing task 2: In some countries, celebrities earn higher salaries than senior politicians. What are the reasons? Is it a negative or positive development?

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 IELTS Academic Essay Answers - #2200119
TOPIC: In some countries, celebrities earn higher salaries than senior politicians. What are the reasons? Is it a negative or positive development?
Answer 1
Pay structure is skewed in favour of famous personalities vis-a-vis Congressmen; rationalisations being plenty, can potentially cause negative outcomes.
Superstars' wages are justified by the nature of work, coupled with their global reach. As is common knowledge, celebrities like actors or sportspersons have had ...
By Reef, 2020-04-06  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 293
AI Comment:
  • You had better rewrite the essay to 4 or 5 paragraphs.
  • Obvious Grammar Errors: 2.
Tutor Comment:
Band 5
Cannot catch the question, the language lacks academic, or say IELTS, style. The second paragraph needs to be rewritten.