Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying history can help us better understand the present. Discuss both views and give your opinion, citing examples from your experience.
People are divided into the views whether the study of history is fruitful for them or not. Some masses ponder that knowledge of history is vain for folks. It is a phase of past we cannot correlate these days; however, opponents advocate that it is a crucial period of our ancestors give information to about them. I ...
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Band: 6The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
You may list your opinion at the introduction clearly. The essay is too long and wordy and difficult to compose in the real IELTS test.
People who do not study history are condemned to repeat it. Some people claim that, but the opponents of the former argue that history does not have a beneficial role in people's life. It widely observed that contemporary life and our ancestor's life has complicated relationship and impossible to divorce.
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Band: 5.5The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
A good essay should show your view clearly. You can do better at this point, especially at the begin and end sections.