IELTS Academic Essay Answers

Test materials of writing task 2: Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion ...

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 IELTS Academic Essay Answers - #2200808
TOPIC: Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.​
Answer 1
It is undeniable that human beings have adversely impacted the existence of a wide range of flora and fauna. While some individuals believe that they have made drastic changes, and now nothing can be done to reverse the current situation, others consider that it is possible, when some potential steps are taken. This ...
By KM, 2020-08-09  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 353
AI Comment:
  • The essay is too long, suggest to shrink it.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Introduction as start point.
  • Obvious Grammar Errors: 1.
Tutor Comment:
Band 6
Task Response:
-All parts of the prompt are addressed, and a position is presented that is directly relevant to the prompt.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Some sentences are wordy or too long to understand.Use too many passive voice sentences.
Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though there are some errors in word choice and spelling.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-Some grammatical errors, such as predicate verb.
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Answer 2
Amongst the significant issues of modern society are desperately struggling with environmental pollution, which has arisen from many grounds and has directed the government and society to itself. However, while authorities believe that human activity's damaging effect is irreversible, the average person insists on ...
By Farhad, 2020-09-27  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 292
AI Comment:
  • The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 1 as start point.
  • Obvious Grammar Errors: 5.
Tutor Comment:
Band 6
Task Response:
-All parts of the prompt are addressed, and a position is presented that is directly relevant to the prompt.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Ideas are generlly arranged coherently, and there is a clear overall progression.
-Some sentences are wordy or too long to understand.
Lexical Resources:
-The range of vocabulary is quite wide and shows awareness of collocation.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-Some grammatical errors, such as article (a, an, the).
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Answer 3
Environmental equilibrium with beings is the most indispensable factor to be maintained. Earthborn actions have pessimistic effects on flora and fauna. It is very late to do something regarding this obstacle is the thought of some humans. In contrast, others believe that conditions can be improved by taking a few ...
By HT, 2020-09-03  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 296
AI Comment:
  • The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Conclusion as start point.
  • Obvious Grammar Errors: 9.
Tutor Comment:
Band 5
Task Response:
-There is some misunderstanding of the task, not discuss both views in the whole essay.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Some sentences are wordy or too long to understand
Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though there are some errors in word choice and spelling.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There are attempts to produce complex structures, but these contain errors.
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