IELTS Academic Essay Answers

Test materials of writing task 2: American film actor John Wayne said: “Tomorrow is the most important thing in life.” How is it important for individuals and countries to think about the future rather than the present? What’s your opinion?

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 IELTS Academic Essay Answers - #2200920
TOPIC: American film actor John Wayne said: “Tomorrow is the most important thing in life.” How is it important for individuals and countries to think about the future rather than the present? What’s your opinion?
Answer 1
The significant issue of contemporary society is desperately struggling with current issues. Nevertheless, some people claim that we should focus more on further problems and think about the future rather than focus on current issues. Although it seems logical and we should plan our future, in my perspective we should ...
By Farhad, 2020-09-23  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 255
AI Comment:
  • The introduction seems long, refine sentences.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 1 as start point.
  • Obvious Grammar Errors: 6.
Tutor Comment:
Band 5.5
Task Response:
-All parts of the prompt are addressed, and a position is presented that is directly relevant to the prompt.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Ideas are generlly arranged coherently, and there is a clear overall progression.
Lexical Resources:
-There is some good use of vocabulary, but spelling errors are noticeable. even some basic words.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, but there are errors in grammatical control, like erors as "avoid to use"
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