IELTS Academic Essay Answers

Test materials of writing task 2: Some scientists believe that intelligent life forms may exist on other planets and some want to send messages to contact them. Others think it is a bad idea because these life forms may be too dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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 IELTS Academic Essay Answers - #2201015
Question:
Some scientists believe that intelligent life forms may exist on other planets and some want to send messages to contact them. Others think it is a bad idea because these life forms may be too dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Answer 1
Some scientists opine that it's rational to contact residents of other planets, while others believe that it can be troublesome to do so. We are going to discuss both sides and then will conclude the result.
Due to advancements in technology, the world has made great progress, and scientists are more desperate to ...
By anam, 2020-11-07  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 277
Band: 6
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-The main ideas are extended and supported; the response is ok.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-The organization is logical, and there is a clear central topic to each paragraph.
Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though there are some errors in word choice and spelling.
-The range of vocabulary is quite wide and shows awareness of collocation, but there are rather too many errors for a higher band here.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and although errors occur, they rarely reduce communication.