IELTS General Writing Task 2

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 IELTS General Writing Task 2 - Study and Practice:My Essay   
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

You should write at least 250 words.
What is successful? Does it mean to be rich? This is difficult question. We can't measure success based only on richness but without other aspects. So I don't think to be...
By Sirus Gates, 2017-10-28  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: NA (Total words: 285)
Comment:
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has MONEY(12) SUCCESSFUL(6) SUCCESS(6); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Introduction as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Conclusion seems too plain, try to polish it.
  • Suggest to refine coherence and cohesion by removing wordy linking words.
I think that the question whether money is the main indicator of people's success is a controversial one. Some people believe that only one who earns a lot of money is...
By Rashedul Islam, 2017-10-04  Show sample content  Show topic and answer essay  

Band: NA (Total words: 299)
Comment:
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has PEOPLE(9) MONEY(8) AND(8); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 1 as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Paragraph 2 seems too plain, try to polish it.