IELTS General Writing Task 2

IELTS writing tasks' topics, answers, and comments.

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By Tyon Sun, 2017-12-03  
Band: NA (Total words: 267)
Comment:
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has AND(9) LANGUAGES(9) SOME(6); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Conclusion as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Introduction seems too plain, try to polish it.
 IELTS General Writing Task 2 - Topic, Answer, and Comment
Several languages die every year. Many people feel this is a positive trend and that a world with fewer languages promotes harmony and understanding between people. Analyze both sides of this argument and provide your opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.
The language extinction happens year and year and no one can change this trend. Some believe that the loss of languages will make our lives simpler by having fewer languages as communication barrier loss. Personally, I agree with statement for a number of reasons.

Firstly, as globalization continues, we need to understand the importance of languages such as English or Mandarin to communicate in business between nations.People have some problems communicating with other people from other countries when they are collaboration for work.For instance, a company in Asia can contact with other companies in the US or Europe if they could speak English which is language of business.Therefore, it is not a big issue if some languages die out and we use only a few languages to communicate.

Secondly, it can help to remove barriers, develop unity and also improve relationships across nations. The conflict between nations will be alleviated. For example, reducing the number of languages, it will be a lot easier for government to understand each other and reach some kinds of necessary national agreements.Moreover, by having loss languages people feel better to those who from other nations, despite religious differences and backgrounds. Also it helps us to build a closer bond to those that otherwise we feel very disconnect to. Therefore, there are a lot of potential increase peace and understanding across the globe.

In conclusion, it is not a big deal if some languages die out and we have a few languages around the world which can bring some benefits to connect other countries in business and help lead to peace between nations.