Mobile phones have made life easier: anyone can use a mobile phone to answer or make calls at any place seven days a week
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Mobile phones have made life easier: anyone can use a mobile phone to answer or make calls at any place seven days a week. Do you think this development has more positive effects or negative effects on individuals and society?
Mobile phones have made life easier: anyone can use a mobile phone to answer or make calls at any place seven days a week. Do you think this development has more positive effects or negative effects on individuals and society?
Answer 1
The proliferation of the internet changed the face of communication media. The use of mobile phones in day-to-day life in society has produced an easier way of life...
It is true that the utilization of cellular phones has tremendously increased in society and made their life and work more effortless...
Amid all those benefits, the mobile phone also brings adverse effects; one of these is that mobile phones can take away your social life...
In conclusion, I am convinced that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks. However, using this latest technology effectively is in individuals' and society's hands...
It is true that the utilization of cellular phones has tremendously increased in society and made their life and work more effortless...
Amid all those benefits, the mobile phone also brings adverse effects; one of these is that mobile phones can take away your social life...
In conclusion, I am convinced that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks. However, using this latest technology effectively is in individuals' and society's hands...
Band: 6
Word Statistics
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| All Words | 277 | 164 | 59% |
| Top 300 Words | 128 (46%) | 54 (32%) | 42% |
| 300 - 1000 Words | 49 (17%) | 37 (22%) | 75% |
| Over 1000 Words | 100 (36%) | 73 (44%) | 73% |
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Link Words: 16 (including link phrase: 2)
Sentences: Number: 20; Average Length: 88 characters; Words/Sentence: 13
Suggestions:
IELTS Essay Format:
-The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
-High-ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing; suggest rephrasing some.
-Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level.
Task Response:IELTS Essay Format:
-The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
-High-ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing; suggest rephrasing some.
-Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level.
-There is some misunderstanding of the task. You should develop both 'individuals and society' for your position. 'negative effects' aren't important in the essay.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Ideas are generally arranged coherently, and there is a clear overall progression.
Lexical Resources:
-The essay didn't use less common vocabulary with accuracy.
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Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms.