Car drivers and cyclists share the same roads, which can cause problems for both
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Car drivers and cyclists share the same roads, which can cause problems for both. Why is this case? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?
Car drivers and cyclists share the same roads, which can cause problems for both. Why is this case? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?
Answer 1
The issue of whether vehicles and bikes should share the same road has been discussed for a while...
First, the prevalence of cycling and excessive vehicles is one of the culprits of this phenomenon...
Several possible plans can be taken to tackle this situation. Firstly, the authorities should install a segregated bicycle lane...
In conclusion, although car drivers and bikers sharing the same road might lead to several negative consequences, there are a few solutions, such as setting up a specific bicycle lane and hosting road safety courses to tackle this problem...
First, the prevalence of cycling and excessive vehicles is one of the culprits of this phenomenon...
Several possible plans can be taken to tackle this situation. Firstly, the authorities should install a segregated bicycle lane...
In conclusion, although car drivers and bikers sharing the same road might lead to several negative consequences, there are a few solutions, such as setting up a specific bicycle lane and hosting road safety courses to tackle this problem...
Band: 7
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| All Words | 281 | 147 | 52% |
| Top 300 Words | 110 (39%) | 45 (30%) | 40% |
| 300 - 1000 Words | 64 (22%) | 33 (22%) | 51% |
| Over 1000 Words | 107 (38%) | 69 (46%) | 64% |
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Link Words: 27 (including link phrase: 3)
Sentences: Number: 16; Average Length: 112 characters; Words/Sentence: 17
Suggestions:
IELTS Essay Format:
-You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has and(12), road(9), drivers(7), might(6), for(5), this(5), bikers(5); try to decrease duplicated words.
-Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level.
-Suggest refining coherence and cohesion by removing wordy linking words.
IELTS Essay Format:
-You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has and(12), road(9), drivers(7), might(6), for(5), this(5), bikers(5); try to decrease duplicated words.
-Suggest using a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level.
-Suggest refining coherence and cohesion by removing wordy linking words.
Answer 2
Automobile riders and bicyclists traveling on the same roadway and causing issues for each other are among the significant problems facing the world today...
Several factors are responsible for the sharing of highways between four-wheeler drivers and peddlers, causing trouble themselves...
But how can the trouble issue among car drivers and peddlers be curtailed. Firstly, I firmly believe that awareness among the public should be increased regarding the safe usage of vehicles on the roadways, especially for car and bicycle riders...
Therefore, based on all the discussion till now, as well as going by my personal experiences, one thing that I would like to state finally is that unless concerted and war-footed efforts are made to address the disorder of possible troubles caused among the four-wheeler drivers and bicyclists traveling on the same path, there will be loss of human life and traffic jams causing more problems to the fellow riders and self...
Several factors are responsible for the sharing of highways between four-wheeler drivers and peddlers, causing trouble themselves...
But how can the trouble issue among car drivers and peddlers be curtailed. Firstly, I firmly believe that awareness among the public should be increased regarding the safe usage of vehicles on the roadways, especially for car and bicycle riders...
Therefore, based on all the discussion till now, as well as going by my personal experiences, one thing that I would like to state finally is that unless concerted and war-footed efforts are made to address the disorder of possible troubles caused among the four-wheeler drivers and bicyclists traveling on the same path, there will be loss of human life and traffic jams causing more problems to the fellow riders and self...
Band: 7
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Answer 3
Issues and accidents involving drivers and cyclists can be caused since they use the same roads. The reason that it happens is that many cities do not have an infrastructure that promotes safety for users...
Even in today's modern world, investments in the streets have been a problem for some governments...
A strategy that could minimize this situation and incentivize more and more citizens to choose healthy transport to commute from work to home is to create path cycling to all streets and set a timetable for when cars cannot exceed and overtake the lines...
In my opinion, these two proposals are helpful for humankind, but it depends on the government's interests in thinking about their population's safety and health...
Even in today's modern world, investments in the streets have been a problem for some governments...
A strategy that could minimize this situation and incentivize more and more citizens to choose healthy transport to commute from work to home is to create path cycling to all streets and set a timetable for when cars cannot exceed and overtake the lines...
In my opinion, these two proposals are helpful for humankind, but it depends on the government's interests in thinking about their population's safety and health...
Band: 6
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Answer 4
Nowadays, with the development of technology, many people have chosen their transportation to be a car instead of public transport...
First, the most common issue is collisions, caused by the difference in speed. For instance, some roads have a maximum speed of 50 km/h, and car drivers can drive at whatever speed they want as long as it is under 50 km/h...
Second, car drivers have always communicated virtually with other cars by signals when they want to turn right, left, or stop, but cyclists do not have the tools to help them do those things...
Some practical solutions can reduce the risks of collisions between cars and bikes, and the government should establish laws that protect cyclists and teach car drivers how to drive safely with them...
In conclusion, the share of roads can cause many problems for car drivers and cyclists. Therefore, some steps can be used to minimize those problems, such as establishing laws that car drivers should yield to cyclists when needed...
First, the most common issue is collisions, caused by the difference in speed. For instance, some roads have a maximum speed of 50 km/h, and car drivers can drive at whatever speed they want as long as it is under 50 km/h...
Second, car drivers have always communicated virtually with other cars by signals when they want to turn right, left, or stop, but cyclists do not have the tools to help them do those things...
Some practical solutions can reduce the risks of collisions between cars and bikes, and the government should establish laws that protect cyclists and teach car drivers how to drive safely with them...
In conclusion, the share of roads can cause many problems for car drivers and cyclists. Therefore, some steps can be used to minimize those problems, such as establishing laws that car drivers should yield to cyclists when needed...
Band: 6
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