Developing countries require aid from international organizations; some think this aid should be financial, while others believe practical aid and advice are more useful.

IELTS Writing Task 2 & Answer

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 IELTS Academic Essay Answers - #2051
Question:
Many developing countries require aid from international organizations to grow. Many people think that this aid should be financial, while others believe practical aid and advice are more useful. Discuss both views, and give your own opinion.
Answer Hints:
The topic needs to discuss views of two sides. All points should be based on the developing countries' circumstances.

The practical aid and advice are put together, but you had better mention them separately.

Financial aid
  • Getting money to buy necessities of life.
  • The quality of life can be improved in the short term.
  • Support developing under intentions of local people.
Practical aid and advice
  • Support and address risk more quickly.
  • Let the poor people get help directly, avoid local corruption.
  • Help to build various facilities and a self-sufficient economy.
Answer 1
People have different views about the kind of support that wealthy nations should provide for poorer ones. Although some say that non-financial support is beneficial for poor...
By Ryan Higgins, 2017-10-23  View full answer
Total words: 342
Band: 8
  • The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has THAT(9) AND(8) COUNTRIES(7); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Introduction as start point.
  • Suggest to use a few rare or uncommon words to demonstrate your vocabulary range and level. E.g., Introduction seems too plain, try to polish it.
Answer 2
Many people think that developing countries need financial support from the international community whereas others take the opposite view and claims that developing nations need...
By RoadTrue Zuan, 2017-10-23  View full answer
Total words: 365
Band: NA
  • The essay is too long, suggest to shrink it.
  • The conclusion is too simple, rewrite to summarize your points.
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has AND(15) AID(9) FOR(9); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Paragraph 2 as start point.