The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed how we live, communicate, and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems.

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 IELTS Academic Essay Answers - #4006
Question:
The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate, and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?
Answer Hints:
The question is about the pros and cons of "increased use of mobile phones". The impact on individuals and society can be written in one paragraph or separate ones.

Good impact
  • Using mobile phones will help people's mobility and release the individuals' potential capability.
  • Mobile phones bring convenient communication and increase efficiency in life and work.
Negative influence
  • Using mobile phones decreases face-to-face communication, and weakens feelings among people.
  • The mobile phones ignore people around but just care about the one behind the phone, not polite to others.
Answer 1
In recent decades, mobile phone increases tremendously across the globe, not only on sale number but also on service type. Some believe that higher usage of mobile phones has...
By Dee Pak, 2018-01-28  View full answer
Total words: 322
Band: NA
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has MOBILE(12) PHONE(10) THAT(10); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Conclusion as start point.
Answer 2
Mobile phones have transformed the lives of nearly everyone on the planet in the last few years . They have made communication easy and cheap between friends , family and...
By Jade Lee, 2017-09-26  View full answer
Total words: 284
Band: NA
  • You had better rewrite the essay to 4 or 5 paragraphs.
  • You should avoid using common words repeatedly, and show your grammatical range and accuracy as possible. The essay has MOBILE(9) AND(6) PHONE(6); try to decrease duplicated words.
  • High ratio basic sight words may degrade your writing, suggest to rephrase some of them. You can try to rewrite Conclusion as start point.