Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. Others, however, believe that people should be free to choose sports activities. Discuss both these views.

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Question:
Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. Others, however, believe that people should be free to choose sports activities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Answer Hints:
You need to discuss the views of the two sides and give your opinion, either side should be ok.

Support
  • Every year we see accidents in dangerous sports.
  • Dangerous sports are expensive, and not fit for common people.
  • Dangerous sports can be replaced with safe ones in most cases.
  • Youth and children risk more in dangerous sports because of less experience.
Object
  • Brave is an important merit we should have.
  • Dangerous sports are a way to build the body and mind stronger.
  • Risk in dangerous sports is manageable.
  • Statistics show some common sports like soccer and boxing have more accidents than dangerous sports.
Answer 1
The unprecedented growth of accidents in dangerous sports has become a major threat to participants. The myriad of individuals argues that life-threatening sports should be prohibited, whereas others are opposed to this statement. I am at loggerhead with this statement. Those sports should be played under professional ...
By jarry , 2020-10-07  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 364
Band: 7
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-Ideas relating to each sector mentioned in the prompt are presented, but there is not much development of some.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-A range of cohesive devices is used flexibly, while each paragraph has a clear central topic that is developed.
Lexical Resources:
-The range of vocabulary is sufficient to allow some flexibility and precision, and it shows an awareness of styles and collocation.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, but there are errors in grammatical control
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Answer 2
Integrated into our daily lives, sports are incredibly crucial. Its importance is, in fact, unprecedentedly stressed in this fitness seeking era. Extreme sports, however, remains controversial.
Some might say that they ought to enjoy their lives to the fullest and that extreme activity is merely another type of ...
By Mp, 2020-12-01  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 285
Band: 6.5
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-Ideas are usually expressed fully, but they sometimes need more support..
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Each paragraph has a clear central topic, which is developed, and there is an effective use of cohesive devices.
Lexical Resources:
-The range of vocabulary is sufficient to allow some flexibility and precision, and it shows an awareness of styles and collocation.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and although errors occur, they rarely reduce communication.
Answer 3
Whether extreme sports should be forbidden or not has always been a hot debate topic. Some argue that it should be restricted as it causes deaths and injuries. In contrast, others take it as a consequence of being careless, and everyone should be responsible for their own decisions. This essay will give reasons why ...
By Kinoko, 2020-10-02  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 308
Band: 6
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-All parts of the prompt are addressed, and a position is presented that is directly relevant to the prompt.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-The organization is logical, and there is a clear central topic to each paragraph.
Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, but the essay didn't use less common vocabulary with accuracy.
- Help Link
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-Grammatical errors are frequent, such as article (a, an, the).
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Answer 4
Today the world sport has huge types of sports activities, several of them are dangerous. Some people believe that hazardous sport should be forbidden by the government, while others consider that people should have the freedom to do or the freedom to choose whatever sport types. In this essay, both views will be ...
By Kairat, 2020-12-02  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 343
Band: 6
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-The main ideas are extended and supported; the response is ok.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Ideas are generally arranged coherently, and there is a clear overall progression.
Lexical Resources:
-The lexical resource is limited, but just about adequate for the task, try to enhance IELTS vocabulary.
- Help Link
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-Use a variety of complex structures, but the writing lacks fine grammatical control and is wordy in a few sentences.
Answer 5
Nowadays, sports activities are very popular with people worldwide; however, some think that anyone must be aware of the concomitant dangers that some sports have and that those sports should be banned. Whether people should decide if any sport is dangerous or not is of controversy, but I think that harmful sports that ...
By Alxin, 2020-12-01  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 394
Band: 6
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-You should present views from two sides by the question. The structure has room to improve. The second paragraph is long but misses the topic.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-There is a clear overall progression in the response, but somewhat mechanically, with occasional errors.
Lexical Resources:
-There are occasional errors in spelling and collocation, but these do not detract from overall clarity.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and although errors occur, they rarely reduce communication.
Answer 6
Dangerous sports activities are becoming the focus of governments and citizens concern around the globe increasingly. While authorities claim that all dangerous leisure activities should be banned, sports professionals and fans claim that it could deprive their opportunity to express themselves. This essay will ...
By Farid, 2020-12-01  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 325
Band: 5.5
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-Only partially address the prompt. The essay doesn't catch the topic closely. You need two sides' opinions. The example isn't fit for IELTS. Anti-communism, either former or latter, possibly risks your score.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-The response is organized into paragraphs, but the focus of each is not always clear.
Lexical Resources:
-The lexical resource is limited, but just about adequate for the task, try to enhance IELTS vocabulary.
- Help Link
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and although errors occur, they rarely reduce communication.