Many people believe that bicycle is a healthy and environmentally-friendly mode of transport

IELTS Writing Task 2 & Answer

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 IELTS Academic Essay Answers - #7023
Question:
Many people believe that bicycle is a healthy and environmentally-friendly mode of transport. However, it is no longer the main form of transport. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the wider population?
Answer 1
Riding a bicycle is a common physical exercise that maintains our health and protects environmental pollution. Many supporters favor it as a popular mode of transportation, but increased public transit and personal cars are the main reasons for its disappearance. I believe that self-awareness and educational campaigns ...
By Lucky, 2021-04-15  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 335
Band: 7
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-This is a well-organized essay, presenting ideas on both sides, developing these ideas effectively throughout the response.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Ideas are logically organized, and there is a clear progression throughout the response.
Lexical Resources:
-The range of vocabulary is sufficient to allow some flexibility and precision, and it shows an awareness of styles and collocation.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, with a fair degree of accuracy.
Answer 2
Due to the fast growth of economics, the great demand for faster moving leads to new transportation inventions. The number of people who use bicycles for daily movement decreases due to two main reasons, namely, new alternatives and better healthcare services.
Contradicting to the slow speed and physical strength ...
By Tran Phuong, 2021-04-15  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 295
Band: 6.5
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-Ideas relating to each sector mentioned in the prompt are presented, but there is not much development of some.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Ideas are logically organized, and there is a clear progression throughout the response.
Lexical Resources:
-The lexical resource is sufficient to allow some flexibility and precision, and although there are a few spelling errors.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-A variety of complex structures is used with some flexibility and accuracy.
Answer 3
Bicycle is considered one of the healthiest and eco-friendly commuting options by some people. Still, it is not the most preferred transport mode, given there are other faster transportation modes available in this technology-driven era. However, there are other benefits one can look at to promote this traditional form ...
By RBALL, 2021-04-18  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 279
Band: 6.5
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-The main ideas are extended and supported; the response is ok; but the solution part is too weak, the essay's structure isn't balanced.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-There is a clear overall progression in the response, but somewhat mechanically, with occasional errors.
Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though the use of informal expressions is not appropriate in this type of response.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a good range of complex structures, and many sentences have accurate grammar and punctuation.
Answer 4
Many agree that bicycle is one of the few healthy modes of transport having a neutral effect on the environment. Nevertheless, bicycles are no longer considered the essential form of transport, as more and more cars are hitting the streets. The following essay outlines the reasons behind these developments and offers ...
By alicia , 2021-04-14  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 383
Band: 6
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-The main ideas are extended and supported; the response is ok.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-The organization is evident, with some simple cohesive devices, but sometimes used inaccurately.Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though there are some errors in word choice and spelling.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and although errors occur, they rarely reduce communication.