Some people think that the best way to improve road transport safety is to let the driver test each year

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 IELTS Academic Essay Answers - #7026
Question:
Some people think that the best way to improve road transport safety is to let the driver test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Answer 1
To increase safety on the main roads, many nowadays believe that drivers should be annually tested to renovate their driving skills. Although the legitimate reason to support this opinion, I largely disagree with this statement. A major cause of road accidents is a poorly designed road system, not the uneducated or ...
By Farid, 2021-05-12  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 374
Band: 7
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-This is a well-organized essay, presenting ideas and developing these ideas effectively throughout the response.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Ideas are generally arranged coherently, and there is a clear overall progression.
Lexical Resources:
-The lexical resource is sufficient to allow some flexibility and precision, and although there are a few wordy express..
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a good range of complex structures, and many sentences have accurate grammar and punctuation.
Answer 2
In order to increase the safety of the road commuters, the appropriate method considered by a few people is to examine the skills of drivers on an annual basis. From my point of view, instead of measuring their skills frequently, the best approach would be to introduce alternate ways.
Firstly, speed checkers might ...
By Anna deus, 2021-05-13  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 334
Band: 7
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-All parts of the prompt are addressed, and a clear position is presented throughout the response.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-A range of cohesive devices is used flexibly, while each paragraph has a clear central topic that is developed.
Lexical Resources:
-There is a wide range of vocabulary, used appropriately and naturally, and there are some less common words and phrases, though there are some errors in word choice and spelling.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-A variety of complex structures is used with some flexibility and accuracy. Grammar and punctuation are well controlled.
Answer 3
These days, ensuring the safety and security of public transportation has been an increasingly popular concern in every part of the world. Consequently, some experts are expressing the contrasting view that a routine test for drivers should be conducted yearly regarding harmless roads. This essay is claimed to against ...
By Reo, 2021-05-14  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 295
Band: 6.5
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-The main ideas are relevant, but some are insufficiently developed.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-Each paragraph has a clear central topic, which is developed, and there is an effective use of cohesive devices.
Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though there are some errors in word choice.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There are attempts to produce complex sentence forms, but some sentences are too long to cause some difficulty for the reader.
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Answer 4
The recent increase in the purchase of cars, bikes, motorbikes, and other automobiles has tremendously increased the movement of vehicles on the road, which often leads to heavy traffic jams, rash driving, and road accidents causing fatalities. With the fast-paced life, people are often in a hurry to reach places and ...
By SB, 2021-05-11  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 302
Band: 6
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-The logic and reasoning look good, but some sentences seem wordy.Coherence and Cohesion:
-There is a clear overall progression in the response, but somewhat mechanically, with occasional errors.Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though there are some errors in word choice and spelling.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and although errors occur, they rarely reduce communication.
Answer 5
Road transport is the most commonly used system by the general public. However, daily accident rates are raising concern among people about the safety of this transportation mode. Some people think that this is the problem of drivers, so the system needs to conduct an annual driving test for the drivers. I can't ...
By Sinoj PX, 2021-05-27  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 297
Band: 6
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-The logic and reasoning look good, but the essay misses the focus "test."
Coherence and Cohesion:
-There is a clear overall progression in the response, but somewhat mechanically, with occasional errors
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Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though there are some errors in word choice and spelling.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-There are attempts to produce complex sentence forms, but there is a lack of grammatical control, which can cause some difficulty for the reader.