We can access information from the Internet easily. Some people say that libraries are no longer necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS Writing Task 2 & Answer

Free Online Vocabulary Test
K12, SAT, GRE, IELTS, TOEFL
 IELTS Academic Essay Answers - #7063
Question:
We can access information from the Internet easily. Some people say that libraries are no longer necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Answer Hints:
The easy answer is to agree with the argument, reflecting common sense.

Agree
  • It is easy to obtain information on the Internet.
  • Cheaper than traditional libraries.
  • No region, time, or even copy number limits.
Disagree
  • Libraries are places to store historical files and documents.
  • Libraries are also places of activities and face-to-face communication.
Answer 1
There has been a tremendous transformation in the Internet age. Many online features have made the Internet the favorite for students, and some think that this is making conventional libraries useless in accessing information. I agree with this to a greater extent.
Firstly, we note that almost every piece of ...
By Magi Gates, 2022-03-06  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Band: 6.5
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-The main ideas are extended and supported; the response is ok, but your supports aren't solid.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-The organization is logical, and there is a clear central topic to each paragraph.
Lexical Resources:
-Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though there are some errors in word choice.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-Grammatical control is variable: some complex structures are produced accurately.