In today's cities, people continue to use cars and motorcycles, which have made transportation increasingly difficult. Why? What is the best way to stop it?

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Question:
In today's cities, people continue to use cars and motorcycles, which have made transportation increasingly difficult. Why? What is the best way to stop people from using cars and motorcycles?
Answer Hints:
The question is to analyze a topic and give a solution. Notice that the question emphasizes "the best way."

Reasons
  • Cities are getting bigger and bigger
  • Commuting distance is increasing car and motorcycle
  • Governments are not using resources well
  • Public transportation is not good
Solutions - choose one to discuss
  • Government increases public transportation
  • More tax and cost on private traffic tools
  • Strict road management and penalty
Answer 1
Now we know that most of the population is using cars and motorcycles for commuting purposes, even though people are aware that these have a detrimental effect on the environment. This essay will examine the reasons and suggest possible solutions to alleviate this problem.
The predominant factor resulting in the ...
By Neya Sha, 2022-06-11  View full answer - Revised by tutor
Total words: 339
Band: 7
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version.
Task Response:
-Ideas relating to each sector mentioned in the prompt are presented, but the solution should be about the best way.
Coherence and Cohesion:
-A range of cohesive devices is used flexibly, while each paragraph has a clear central topic that is developed.
Lexical Resources:
-Substitution is usually good, although there is some repetition.
Grammar Range and Accuracy:
-Grammar and punctuation are well controlled.