Question: What is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?
Answer Hints: This is a direct question whose answer is open. But, your answer had better be accepted as widely as possible and follow the judge of political correctness. For example, you can choose "honest people" or "honesty."
Why - honesty
A society or community consists of people.
Communication among people is the base for shaping society.
No honesty, no valuable communication, no trust.
A good society should shrink the room of cheaters and fakers.
How - build an honest society
Education in school to raise an honest generation.
Governments disclose cheaters and cheating cases by strict rules.
People monitor public figures' not faithful behaviors and cancel them.
The modern world is bringing society diversity so that, in the minds of everyone, the perfect society is different. As for me, an ideal society must have lots of merits in various aspects, but the most important element in them is that honest people dominate society. The ideal habitat truly depends on the ...
The below version has fixed some obvious lexical and grammatical defects. The band is by the revised version, but comments are based on the original version. Task Response: -Ideas are usually expressed fully, excellently answers the question. Coherence and Cohesion: -A range of cohesive devices is used flexibly, while each paragraph has a clear central topic that is developed. Lexical Resources: -Lexis is mainly appropriate for the task, though there are some errors in word choice. The essay didn't use less common vocabulary with accuracy. Grammar Range and Accuracy: -There is a good range of complex structures, and many sentences have accurate grammar and punctuation.